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Shooting Star by Love-The-Nekos Shooting Star by Love-The-Nekos
something i made :I lol aww i can't watch supernatural because my mother is doing homework XI oh well~! enjoy~!
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To start this is very cute, I really love the colors, especially the ones in her hair. The coloring is very nice although it could stand a little refinement in the realm of smoothness but overall it's still really well done.

While the pose is very energetic there are some anatomy issues that need to be addressed and they're most centered in her arms. While everything else is pretty solid the arms are too short for her body. Her hands are also very off and therefore awkward looking. They seem to be all fingers, I suggest drawing a place specifically for the palm before attaching the fingers to help give them more of a sense of solidity.

Her ears are very cute but they don't look right where they attach to the head. They're blending into the hair even though they'd realistically be separate from it unless her ears were made of hair. Instead it would look better to have them be sticking out of the hair with pieces going over it to hide where they connect to the skull.

On a very small final note when you have a character with their mouth open like that it tends to look more natural to have a bit of their teeth showing.

Very cute though, the background and stars look just superb as well.
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Hanna030 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
Oh my god it's so cute > <
Love-The-Nekos Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
aww thx you~!
Kit-Kat-Neko Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
wiiman46 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
punk0000 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Student General Artist
awww!! :meow: cuteness!! :iconadorableplz:
MDLMEMORYBANK Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
I will always admire the amount of colors you put into your work >w< not to mention your over the top adorableness :heart: and i like what you did with the black frame with her popping out, it adds a nice contrast with overall eye fun :)
xxbluedreamer Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ahh~your works are so inspiring~~:iconchuuplz:
Minoki-chan Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconomg1plz: Your coloring is amazing O__O.
No longer touch the crayons. xD
Looks Awesome-lyyyy cute N-chan^^
TwelfthMoon Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
so cute~
NY-Knux Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
I loveee this x)
FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
It's incredible how great you've become in drawings! :D I still remember your piece of Melandry of :iconheart-of-wildfire:, this one: [link]

And now, it's so incredible!

And by the way, aren't you going to take part in my contest? I'm sure it would be a great challenge for you :D Here are the information: [link]
Love-The-Nekos Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thx lol oh and sorry i forgot ^^; its just i haven't been on
XxRitsukA Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Student General Artist
This is so cute!!! XDD
Love-The-Nekos Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
thx so much~! C:>
XxRitsukA Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Np!!! XD
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Submitted on
February 9, 2012
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